After sending my banner design to the hay festival for approval they requested I make a few alterations to the design to make it more suited to the hay festival’s audience.
The alterations that have been made are:
- Bringing the left most figure in front of the tree so the viewer can see the full design at least once
- Removing the drop shadow to neaten up the image
- and overall increasing brightness of the image, making the colours more friendly and appealing.
I agree that this does improve the image and am glad to have received this feedback.
I have added cut lines to this image using the information from the workshop we had on preparing for print and have divided up the image into sections to make it more manageable to hang.